old feathers

[machinery]

you had to fly, beautiful wings.
the ground collected old feathers.

in the white glint of daylight,
boughs awaited a glimpse.

trees grew lovely Spring dresses,
but your nest wasn?t an ornament.

[parch]

I just stopped by to look for an old piece I might have posted. I couldn't find it, but I see that you've posted. today. on the day. that I stopped by. cool.
so then I had to post too, and now I'm trying to critique, but I don't have much to say on this. "trees grew lovely Spring dresses" is a good line. otherwise, I didn't pick up on a lot.

glad to see you here. glad to see me here.
sorry to question on your thread, but I know you'll look and read so hey -

do you know what I called that one piece I wrote senior yr bout Jason Riney and it had all these quotes in it, and it was long, and probably boring, and I probably thought it meant more than it did (even though it did and all things do because its language, right? it means an approximate of what we all think we agree it means) -blah!
do you know what I'm talking about?
I want to say Dripping bongos or something, but I know that's cause I'm thinking buson and the title did have bongos in it, but not dripping, right?
let me know if you know what I'm talking about.

or, ya know... talk about this piece... cause it is your thread. I'm sorry. I suck candy apples.